Sunday, April 8, 2012

Free writing week 4 Spring II


Health is a big concern for a lot of people, nowadays. To improve their health, many people are using vitamin pills, mineral water, and medications. But the easiest way to boost up your body functions are exercising and eating right. However, it does not mean that you cannot use any vitamins products to support your body. First of all; eating habits are mostly affected on your health. That’s why many people said “You are what you eat”. For example, if you eat McDonald for a month, you will realize that eating fast food for a long period of time is not healthy. Secondly, having a good routine of exercising is also necessary. As the result of this good routine, people are less likely having high cholesterol, high blood pressure, and many unexpected symptoms. Finally, there are many solutions to solve your health problems. So, why don’t you start with the easiest ways and save your money ?

1 comment:

  1. Clear and to the point, Khiem. You make a lot of interesting observations.

    Grammar notes:
    *a lot of people nowadays
    *However, that
    *eating habits are the most effective to your health OR your health is mostly affected by your eating habits
    *if you eat McDonald's
    *good routine of exercise
    *As a result
    *less likely to have

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